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Writing Listing Descriptions That Convert

Learn the anatomy of a high-converting listing description. We analyzed 10,000 successful listings to find the patterns that drive buyer engagement.

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Emily Rodriguez

Marketing Director

January 20, 20266 min read

We analyzed 10,000 listing descriptions from properties that sold within 30 days at or above asking price. Here's what we learned about what makes listing descriptions convert.

The Anatomy of a High-Converting Description

The Hook (First Sentence)

Your opening sentence has one job: stop the scroll. The best-performing listings start with:

  • Emotional appeals: "Welcome home to your private oasis..."
  • Unique selling points: "Rare corner unit with panoramic views..."
  • Action language: "Don't miss this stunning renovation..."
  • What to avoid: Starting with basic facts like "This 3 bedroom, 2 bathroom home..." Save the specs for later.

    The Story (Body)

    The middle section should paint a picture of life in the home:

  • Help buyers envision their daily routine
  • Highlight how spaces connect and flow
  • Mention the feelings the home evokes
  • Example: Instead of "Large backyard," try "Spend summer evenings on the expansive patio while kids play in the fully-fenced backyard."

    The Details (Features)

    Now it's time for the specifics:

  • Lead with updated or premium features
  • Group related features together
  • Use specific details (granite counters, hardwood floors)
  • The Close (Call to Action)

    End with urgency and next steps:

  • "Schedule your private showing today"
  • "This rare opportunity won't last"
  • "Be the first to see this stunning home"
  • Key Findings from Our Analysis

    Optimal Length

    Descriptions between 150-250 words performed best. Shorter descriptions felt incomplete; longer ones lost attention.

    Most Impactful Features to Highlight

  • Natural light / windows
  • Updated kitchens
  • Outdoor living space
  • Storage
  • Location highlights
  • Words That Boost Engagement

  • "Stunning" (+23% more inquiries)
  • "Move-in ready" (+18%)
  • "Private" (+15%)
  • "Rare" (+12%)
  • Words That Hurt Performance

  • "TLC needed" (-34% inquiries)
  • "Motivated seller" (-28%)
  • "As-is" (-25%)
  • "Cozy" (when describing size, -18%)
  • The Curb Approach

    Our AI was trained on these high-performing patterns. When you use Curb, your descriptions automatically incorporate:

  • Compelling hooks
  • Emotional storytelling
  • Strategic feature highlighting
  • Urgency-driving closes
  • Ready to see the difference? Generate your next listing description with Curb and watch your inquiry rate climb.

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